james adventure to the haunted house

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5 Responses to james adventure to the haunted house

  1. tangj says:

    yo Irina, you written the word ‘VILLAGE’ a lot and also you were told to split them in two paragraphs.

  2. chows says:

    James that is really good just add more adjectives other than that it is awesome!

  3. zkhok1 says:

    nice work you added a lot of description

  4. Secret Book Club Member says:

    This is great, I especially like this part: “When they entered they started to hear some creepy sounds drifting through the air, then the lights blew away; a loud roar blew them out like candles. When they looked up, they saw a moving one-eyed-doll with a blade, as it shivered, they screamed and tried open the door but it’s no use,” I look forward to reading your next tale.

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