This is a good little story, well done. Be careful not to assume everyone knows who Alphas are and what a Omega power source is. You must structure your story well enough so that you can give the reader all the details they need to understand the plot, in 100 words, difficult I know, but a great challenge.
You could say more than alpha and where did the aliens come from?
This is a good little story, well done. Be careful not to assume everyone knows who Alphas are and what a Omega power source is. You must structure your story well enough so that you can give the reader all the details they need to understand the plot, in 100 words, difficult I know, but a great challenge.
Brilliant story and idea Syed. It is good because you used an idea of what you like; I like the idea of the aliens and the omega power-source
Nice story I like the part about when the aliens died