Wow! Some intense action in your scary story Imaan. Try to vary sentence lengths to create effects.
Thank you very much I appreciate it lots be sure to check out my new story:)
thaks miss for the advice I will use it lots:)
I think your story is really interesting,maybe you could add more description to make it better? Peace
You have added interesting punctuation and a good affect of 100 words ronnie
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Wow! Some intense action in your scary story Imaan. Try to vary sentence lengths to create effects.
Thank you very much I appreciate it lots be sure to check out my new story:)
thaks miss for the advice I will use it lots:)
I think your story is really interesting,maybe you could add more description to make it better? Peace
You have added interesting punctuation and a good affect of 100 words ronnie