imaan 100 word challenge

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4 Responses to imaan 100 word challenge

  1. nanand says:

    Wow! Some intense action in your scary story Imaan. Try to vary sentence lengths to create effects.

  2. janji says:

    Thank you very much I appreciate it lots be sure to check out my new story:)

  3. janji says:

    thaks miss for the advice I will use it lots:)

  4. Ronnie and peace says:

    I think your story is really interesting,maybe you could add more description to make it better? Peace

    You have added interesting punctuation and a good affect of 100 words ronnie

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