Esha! ghost

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4 Responses to Esha! ghost

  1. nanand says:

    Great stuff Esha! I really loved the way you made careful word choices to paint a clearer picture for your reader. Remember to check your capitals.

  2. Secret Book Club Member says:

    This is a great tale, full of well chosen vocabulary, nice little connecting phrases and a range of punctuation and dialogue to help engage the reader and clearly communicate your ideas.

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