Great stuff Esha! I really loved the way you made careful word choices to paint a clearer picture for your reader. Remember to check your capitals.
Thanks Miss Anand for the comment. Esha
This is a great tale, full of well chosen vocabulary, nice little connecting phrases and a range of punctuation and dialogue to help engage the reader and clearly communicate your ideas.
Thank you secret book club
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Great stuff Esha! I really loved the way you made careful word choices to paint a clearer picture for your reader. Remember to check your capitals.
Thanks Miss Anand for the comment.
Esha
This is a great tale, full of well chosen vocabulary, nice little connecting phrases and a range of punctuation and dialogue to help engage the reader and clearly communicate your ideas.
Thank you secret book club