This is a great little tale, well done. I especially liked some of your descriptive phrases such as, “weird footsteps in the muddy pathway” and, “Then small echoes whispering in the distance”. When writing your next tale make sure when proof reading it that what you have written clearly communicates to the reader the events and sequences in your story, make sure the reader can follow whats happening easily. I look forward to your next tale.
Great creation of atmosphere through careful word choice. Remember your ideas are great.
This is a great little tale, well done. I especially liked some of your descriptive phrases such as, “weird footsteps in the muddy pathway” and, “Then small echoes whispering in the distance”. When writing your next tale make sure when proof reading it that what you have written clearly communicates to the reader the events and sequences in your story, make sure the reader can follow whats happening easily. I look forward to your next tale.
Thank you secret club member
I’m sure to remember what you have said
thank you for writing
by the author of this tale