A Great story Layla, well done. I especially liked the phrases, ” Bags full, candy in mouths” “no choice but to follow” and “Darker every minute”I look forward to reading your next tale.
Thank you for your amazing feed back .Thank you for reading my story and I’m looking forward for you to read my next tale and I hope you like it . It should be up in the next couple of days and again thank you for reading .
By Layla Fray
Great use of detail to paint a clear picture in your reader’s mind.
A Great story Layla, well done. I especially liked the phrases, ” Bags full, candy in mouths” “no choice but to follow” and “Darker every minute”I look forward to reading your next tale.
Thank you for your amazing feed back .Thank you for reading my story and I’m looking forward for you to read my next tale and I hope you like it . It should be up in the next couple of days and again thank you for reading .
By Layla Fray
Thank you for reading Miss Anand.
By Layla Fray
Layla I was hugging Karina because I was so scared
Thanks brebre