Escape from Halloween Town by Layla Fray

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6 Responses to Escape from Halloween Town by Layla Fray

  1. nanand says:

    Great use of detail to paint a clear picture in your reader’s mind.

  2. Secret Book Club Member says:

    A Great story Layla, well done. I especially liked the phrases, ” Bags full, candy in mouths” “no choice but to follow” and “Darker every minute”I look forward to reading your next tale.

    • leol says:

      Thank you for your amazing feed back .Thank you for reading my story and I’m looking forward for you to read my next tale and I hope you like it . It should be up in the next couple of days and again thank you for reading .
      By Layla Fray

  3. leol says:

    Thank you for reading Miss Anand.

    By Layla Fray

  4. bernb says:

    Layla I was hugging Karina because I was so scared

  5. leol says:

    Thanks brebre

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