I like the fact that your tale was set in a unusually place, a second hand shop, a great and unique idea. I like the structure of the story and the tension you built towards the end. I was expecting a more scary ending, or something really different to happen, to match the uniqueness of the setting. I look forward to your next tale!
Good use of thoughts and feelings to pull me into your short story Prithikaa. Try using questions to involve your reader more.
I like the fact that your tale was set in a unusually place, a second hand shop, a great and unique idea. I like the structure of the story and the tension you built towards the end. I was expecting a more scary ending, or something really different to happen, to match the uniqueness of the setting. I look forward to your next tale!
Well done used a very well structure Esha Patel
Very good narration ! I like the fact that you were able to compress the entire story in 100 words.
Enjoyed your story..good try..post more stories…akshu