you story was so interesting I really like your description
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wonderful work Amelie BFFTWD
maby you could could PUT ABIT MORE DESCRIPTION TO PICTURE THE PICTURE MORE!
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
wonderful work Amelie BFFTWD
maby you could could PUT ABIT MORE DESCRIPTION TO PICTURE THE PICTURE MORE!
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
wonderful work Amelie BFFTWD
maby you could could PUT ABIT MORE DESCRIPTION TO PICTURE THE PICTURE MORE!
Hi Amelie,
I like the way you told me the back story of the picture and used punctuation to add emphasis. You jump between i and they – stick to one next time.
An enjoyable read, well done.
Mrs M
wow Amelie I love how you added in the suspense at the end
to improve if you wanted to you can check your spellings
🙂
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
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you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
wonderful work Amelie BFFTYD
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
wonderful work Amelie BFFTWD
maby you could could PUT ABIT MORE DESCRIPTION TO PICTURE THE PICTURE MORE!
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
wonderful work Amelie BFFTWD
maby you could could PUT ABIT MORE DESCRIPTION TO PICTURE THE PICTURE MORE!
BY IVA 5B
you story was so interesting I really like your description
by iva
wonderful work Amelie BFFTWD
maby you could could PUT ABIT MORE DESCRIPTION TO PICTURE THE PICTURE MORE!
BY IVA 5B
PUT SOME SIMELIES IN YOUR WORK IVA MRS MOORE
great story
try to check your spellings
Hi Amelie,
I like the way you told me the back story of the picture and used punctuation to add emphasis. You jump between i and they – stick to one next time.
An enjoyable read, well done.
Mrs M