khalisah this is very funny it made me laugh I really like this next time you could give us more description and add in some similes
p.s I really like this
This was a great read, I loved you precise detail of everything that flew- even your hamster, to paint a picture in my mind. Try to vary your sentence starters next time, try starting with ly or ing words.
Well done
Mrs M
WOW yours is very good
maybe you could add a simile
xx
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khalisah this is very funny it made me laugh I really like this next time you could give us more description and add in some similes
p.s I really like this
I really like your description. Maybe add more similes
Hi Khalisah ,
This was a great read, I loved you precise detail of everything that flew- even your hamster, to paint a picture in my mind. Try to vary your sentence starters next time, try starting with ly or ing words.
Well done
Mrs M