Hi Kayshap, I like the way you have used the narrator’s voice and questions to draw me into your story of the picture. Try not to overdo it with the vocab as some of it does not fit the context. An exciting read. Mrs M
thank you for the advice 😀
Hi Kashap , This is a very exciting piece of work . I am loving the way you used questions 🙂
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Hi Kayshap,
I like the way you have used the narrator’s voice and questions to draw me into your story of the picture. Try not to overdo it with the vocab as some of it does not fit the context.
An exciting read.
Mrs M
thank you for the advice
😀
Hi Kashap ,
This is a very exciting piece of work . I am loving the way you used questions 🙂
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