It was a good try , but you missed simple capital letters and spelling mistakes such as fort wrong and you missed a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence.
In the middle paragraph you could of added a bit more.
It was okay, but you did have quite allot of mistakes there, it could have been a bit more descriptive, but a good try
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It was a good try , but you missed simple capital letters and spelling mistakes such as fort wrong and you missed a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence.
In the middle paragraph you could of added a bit more.
It was okay, but you did have quite allot of mistakes there, it could have been a bit more descriptive, but a good try